Literature Grammar Help!!!

[coralyn]

I'm putting up a signage on my shop. I got this so far..

PLEASE DO NOT LEAVE YOUR VALUABLES UNATTENDED. The management will not be responsible for theft or loss of personal property.

Is my grammar correct?
What are other ways to say this?

Thank you!

 

[Joe]

I'm putting up a signage on my shop. I got this so far..



Is my grammar correct?
What are other ways to say this?

Thank you!

It looks correct to me.

 

[Amy SF]

I'm putting up a signage on my shop. I got this so far..



Is my grammar correct?
What are other ways to say this?

Thank you!

Actually, I think it's perfect. You don't need to change it.

 

[coralyn]

Thank you @Joe and @Amy SF

I printed and posted 5 copies and someone still left an android tablet yesterday though. Haha. I'm thankful I have reliable staff here.

 

[Amy SF]

I'm curious to know what kind of shop you have where somebody would leave an Android tablet behind.

 

[coralyn]

I manage a computer cafe, @Amy SF

 

[Amy SF]

I manage a computer cafe, @Amy SF

Ah, well that would explain it. I hope this person gets his or her tablet back. I'd go out of my mind if I left something like that behind somewhere.